Hi readers i'm going to write a poem about One Small Step For Man
The Moon Poem
The moon is round as a circle.
The moon is cold like Ice.
The moon is rocky as the sand.
I can jump on the moon like a trampoline or my bed.
Is the moon made out of cheese no that's a myth.
The moon poem the moon poem my name is Divine and this poem is about the moon.
Hi Divine,
ReplyDeleteMikey here. Congratulations on completing you first Week 1 activity! It's awesome to see that you're carrying on with the programme passed the Teaser Week. :)
What a wonderful poem! I like how you've used similes to compare the moon to things that would be familiar to your readers. If you could, do you think you'd travel to the moon?
Have a lovely day, Divine. Keep up the great blogging! :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey
Kia Ora and no I don't think I want to go to the moon it will be cold.Thank you
Deletehi divine i think you did amazing next time you good ad a little moon and clouds.
ReplyDeleteWhat does next time you good ad a little moon and star mean.
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