This is my first online writing about my Monster writing, I hope you like it. This is a picture of my Monster.
Thank you for reading my blog. Please comment below.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
You must be an expert! I enjoyed reading your description.
ReplyDeleteA great writer uses and you have used:
Correct paragraphs
Descriptive vocabulary
Similes