Today I'm going to show you what I've been doing for my Term 2 Writing 2. This term I've been learning that my writing has to have a, Strong Narrative which is Believable, Descriptive and consistent.
Today we Sick Sentences and changed boring sentences to exciting sentences.
Here is my boring Sentence.
'Anna sat down and touched the mirror.'
Here is my Sick Sentence.
Anna sat down on the uncomfortable rock hard floor.
In my story I'm talking about a girl called Anna.
Here is a Photo.
Here is some of my story but I haven't finished yet.
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