I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Well done for completing your writing plan. You have added lots of details and linked all your events. I look forward to reading your narrative and seeing how you develop your writing on Monday.
Your next step is to turn each section into a story which shows how your characters are acting and feeling. Make sure you watch the video again if you are not sure how to do this.
Hi Divine, I am looking forward to reading your narrative. I love the humour that you show and the drama of the situation. Do you think you will use speech marks in your narrative when people are speaking?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Divine,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing your writing plan. You have added lots of details and linked all your events. I look forward to reading your narrative and seeing how you develop your writing on Monday.
Your next step is to turn each section into a story which shows how your characters are acting and feeling. Make sure you watch the video again if you are not sure how to do this.
:) Miss D
Hi Divine,
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading your narrative. I love the humour that you show and the drama of the situation. Do you think you will use speech marks in your narrative when people are speaking?