It's you favourtie spanish greeting blogger, But today she is greeting in french.
I was given by my lovely Teacher Miss D to do a poem. Here is the awsome work I did.
Thank you for reading my blog. Please coment and have a bonita day.(Adiocs)
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Wow Divine! I can't wait for Spring now...I love picnics in spring with my niece and nephew sitting under the flowering magnolias in the botanic gardens. The similes and imagery you used in your poem reminded me of spring and brought to mind my experiences of it. Did you know that you were using smilies and imagery? These are strong techniques that good writers use. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Divine.
ReplyDeleteI like Spring because of baby lambs.They are SO cute and I like Winter because I like to watch the snow fall.
Well done on completing your poems.
Have a great week and thanks for sharing your work.I appreciate it.
Bonjour Divine. Warm like a sheep's wool, I love this as it tells me how you would feel.
ReplyDeleteSpring and autumn are my favourite seasons because I like the changes in the trees and other plants, and it's not too hot or too cold.
Au revoir :)